五、观点不明朗

讨厌指数：★★★

雅思大作文很重要的一点就是你的逻辑性和观点，如果观点都不明确，后面的举例证明等都会缺乏说服力，自然分数也不会高。比如：

写作主题

Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

六、语法错误多

讨厌指数：★★★

涉及到雅思写作评分标准中的语法多样性和准确性，语法错误不断自然会成为扣分点。比如：

写作主题

If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished?

案例：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

七、意思反复重复

讨厌指数：★★★

反复重复一个意思，让考官会觉得你并没有什么可以表达的，或者词汇表达能力有限，自然也会扣分。比如：

写作主题

Your opinion on DINK families

案例：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

八、观点绝对化

讨厌指数：★★★

考生在使用语言描述事物或者表达自己的观点时，应尽可能避免语言过于绝对化，更应该注意该语言中非绝对化表达方式的学习，这样才能尽显文章内容的客观性。比如：

写作主题 1

The importance of confidence

案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

写作主题 2

The solution to the traffic problem

案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

九、内容过分简单

讨厌指数：★★

考官想给你打分都没有内容，所以切记开头不要只写一两句话。比如：

写作主题

The importance of environmental protection

案例：This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

十、用词不当

讨厌指数：★★

用词不当会暴露你的词汇，而且评分标准中谈到“在不同的语境中，使用正确的词性；”所以在使用词汇的时候，正确性也是非常重要的。比如：

写作主题

Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

总之呢，除了以上这些开头会影响我们的分数之外，在雅思写作正文使用词汇方面，雅思官方给出了以下建议

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相比短语动词，最好使用正式的单个动词。

避免使用个人化的或会话样式的词汇(如I,me,my,you,we,us，our...）

避免使用经常在日常会话中出现的单词和短语（如kids,big,heaps...)

不要使用口语化的英语或俚语(如gonna/wanna,ain’t nothin’,dead as a doornail...)

不要使用缩写单词(如can’t,won’t,shouldn’t,hasn’t...)

避免使用缩略语。( 如 yrs,e.g., i.e....应该写出这些单词相对应的形式: years,for example, that is)。

以上，雅思写作要求正式的文体格式，所以大家除了准备一个好的开头外，还要注意正式词汇、简洁、个性化，这才是雅思写作的三大法宝！